I really love this image! The desaturation works very well. The text seems large though. I would shrink it down to a single line under the image.Nice nice work!
thanks for the feedback, i see what your saying about the text, i will shrink it down
An unsolicited thought on the text: If this is for a photojournalism lab, then you may also want to consider writing the cutline in AP style which is used by all press outlets. The form is time-date-place. So for example: "NYU filmmaker, Phillip Van, quenches his thirst late Friday night during an excursion through Heeb's Grocery in downtown Bozeman."
alright, that i didn't know, thanks a lot
Great portrait Kyle. Love the straight on angle and the repetition of shape in the background. I like the way he is carrying the jugs as if they are six shooters.
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