Friday, April 10, 2009

360 - Beauty project

Here are some more for my 360 final... hopefully these are a bit more successful. I have many more angles of these, but I was wondering what you all thought of them so far. I'm debating taking out the left shoe in the one where you can see both and her strap in the third one. Let me know! Thanks!

5 comments:

Bek said...

That second foot peeking in on the zoomed out shoe shot is unbelievably distracting. If not for that, I think the image is another good one! And I like the close-up, smeared eyes.

Just be careful about what Ian was saying in how you're cropping the straight-on faces all the same

LeAnn Bennett said...

I love these ones, I think the close up of the shoe would be better since your other blood leg picture are more zoomed out.

I also love the idea behind the markings one. I prefer the close up of the messy mascara more than the straight on.

I like the new ideas, I think this will really help diversify what you had.

James Olson said...

I really love how these are working...it's got that sexy look of a product shot but it has the reality of how things can sometimes be frustrating when using products like this.
The new angles are working and the bluntness is being conveyed. The only thing that could detract from the project is how you lay it out in the book. Get a lot of advice from many people on what could work.(but essentially do what you think looks good)

MarieYC said...

Thanks guys! I finally feel a lot better about this project! I'm glad you said that about the left shoe Bek, I didn't know if I should keep it because of the other leg one, but I most definitely won't! I'll start working on different layout...ikes!

Nubia Garcia said...

I like the second one and the last one. They work together with the one picture we loved in critique. I love the idea. I think you are doing a great job.