why you have the houses in the background in focus? Would it be more effective to put a selective focus on Steph? 2.8 or 4 vs 22 or 16?
Also seeing the two sets of foot steps in the snow makes me question two things, does jesus walk beside her or did she just get in a fight with a lover? If it was the fight why not more movement in the foot steps..?
Wish I could see the back end of the car.
Friedlander meets Winogrand?
i agree with Ian, the end of the car is creating a bad sort of tension. but the extreme depth of field i believe works well with what you are trying to convey. I love the houses in the background. everything in the frame is working, and has a time period feel. i think this is an effective reproduction of what could be in a photo album.
I agree with Ian, but I'm also wondering if that will be such an issue after you've done some deterioration to the image. I like the style you are going for so far!
I question her position. Are there many snapshots where someone is just sitting in the snow like this? It looks like it was posed by a photographer rather than a moment captured by someone with a camera.
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