You should watch out for some of your hotspots. Even the coconut has one. How are you going to make these unique?
I'm going to pair them with another photo of the inside of the fruit, so they will be a series of diptychs when I'm done
i don't necessarily mind the shadow, but does it serve a purpose?http://www.diyphotography.net/create-wonderful-sliced-fruit-images
I really think you should make your shadow behind the object more consistent throughout. it looks to me like theres a stop or two difference between the coconut and the lemon. unless of course that was your intent. other than the minor hotspots they look great. i want diptychs. now!
these were quick digitals after i took the 4x5's hopefully the shadows on those are more uniform ill put the dyptichs up when i have them
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