i fond nothing about this image interesting. its very boring. and awkward.
I don't think the yellow/red object in the corner adds anything to the image. I like the minimalism of it though. The stark, white counter and floor combined with the plastic wrapped heart gives the sense of a very sterile and artificial environment.I'd maybe mess with the placement and angles a bit more; the corner edge of the counter does seem awkward.
No better way to get into a woman's heart than giving her nuts. I agree with dan about the top left corner. I know what you are trying to do, but it isn't recognizable enough to be effective. (Pill Bottle?) @cam, it is interesting because the image is awkward and boring. (contemperary right?) I love the image, it breaks a lot of rules like putting something in the middle of the frame and forcing a point of tension on the edge of the frame. But the combination of the 2 makes the image interesting, like you have a grounding point with the heart but the tension on the edges draw you away. if one wasn't there I would find the image either boring or awkward as well. But the top left doesn't add as much tension as I think you were going forALSO It might be my screen, but it looks quite cyan on the floor
the heart seams way more saturated than other versions of this image, i agree with dan the red thing in the corner adds nothing and is kind of distracting. as far as it being uninteresting or contemporary I'm on the fence. i think you have created much stronger minimalist images "like the soap one". and this one kind of falls flat for me
I am fond of this image, the boring/awkward nature acts as a metaphor for the stages of love.
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