Monday, October 27, 2008

progress to shelley night

just shelley or...

I'm hoping this is the final of this image. I would really appreciate some feedback. If there is anything at all you have to say please say it so I can iron out this pic.
I am accepting any and all criticism. Please be honest and harsh!
This is a better look at the creature.

4 comments:

Keegan Fields said...

color seems to be slightly off (only by a very miniscual amount) oh well.

Pennie said...

the creature just seems a little stiff, maybe it's the placement. maybe if it were looking down into the hole or something it might help. just think it needs to interact with the landscape a little more. lookin great tho.

Ryan Krueger said...

I really like the simplicity of the top one over the other, as long as the creature isn't needed for the story in this image.

Keegan Fields said...

thanks for the input I think i've decided to scrap the creature. it does seem to be distracting.