So I've been plodding around the Deerfield River Watershed in Massachusetts for my research grant and am starting to make photographs (as well as kayak). Here are a couple quicky proof scans of what I have so far. I am still finding direction, but any feedback is welcome.
4 comments:
really like the bottom image. and the top image doesn't bother me at all but the two paired together seems a bit obscure. I don't really see the direction or for that matter what emotion is being conveyed.
just read the "I am still finding direction" part...scratch that last comment.
Imma let you finish, but both of these are lacking the collin avery-esc obscurity. Both are too literal and don't leave me questioning the reason you took these photos. I want to see images that most people wouldn't take photos of, but done in a way that makes them visually beautiful. More like "2 trees" on your blog. subtle, yet there is a definite focus on what drew you to the scene. These 2 seem a little too obvious and simple to be able to hold up, or surpass, your previous work.
I agree with John these are missing the collin-ness. but i really like 2 trees.
Post a Comment