Friday, November 9, 2007

Turn Ons

These are the images from my short book for 260. I am confident in them technically, but am wondering whether i got across the statement i was trying to make about the dominance electronics have in our modern lives. I would love some feedback!


Camden Hardy said...

Not sure what you mean by "dominance".

To me it seems like you're saying that our intimacy is shifting away from each other toward electronics.

I don't know if this is what you're trying to accomplish, but either way I would suggest revising the statement and getting more specific with it. Dominance

Nice use of selective focus on the first and last images.

zallen said...

I would love to see you branch out more than just electronic devices. It would be cool to see some more everyday things like a washer/dryer, kitchen stuff, etc. You could go lots of places with it.