These are the images from my short book for 260. I am confident in them technically, but am wondering whether i got across the statement i was trying to make about the dominance electronics have in our modern lives. I would love some feedback!
To me it seems like you're saying that our intimacy is shifting away from each other toward electronics.
I don't know if this is what you're trying to accomplish, but either way I would suggest revising the statement and getting more specific with it. Dominance
Nice use of selective focus on the first and last images.
I would love to see you branch out more than just electronic devices. It would be cool to see some more everyday things like a washer/dryer, kitchen stuff, etc. You could go lots of places with it.
These are the images from my short book for 260. I am confident in them technically, but am wondering whether i got across the statement i was trying to make about the dominance electronics have in our modern lives. I would love some feedback!
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Not sure what you mean by "dominance".
To me it seems like you're saying that our intimacy is shifting away from each other toward electronics.
I don't know if this is what you're trying to accomplish, but either way I would suggest revising the statement and getting more specific with it. Dominance
Nice use of selective focus on the first and last images.
I would love to see you branch out more than just electronic devices. It would be cool to see some more everyday things like a washer/dryer, kitchen stuff, etc. You could go lots of places with it.
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