Not sure what you mean by "dominance". To me it seems like you're saying that our intimacy is shifting away from each other toward electronics. I don't know if this is what you're trying to accomplish, but either way I would suggest revising the statement and getting more specific with it. Dominance Nice use of selective focus on the first and last images.
I would love to see you branch out more than just electronic devices. It would be cool to see some more everyday things like a washer/dryer, kitchen stuff, etc. You could go lots of places with it.
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