I feel like the lines of the veil are too hard. It makes the face stand out too much. I also feel as if I've seen this type of image too much so it inherits a type of corniness just because of that.
It looks like a nice picture of water and a nice portrait but combined, I do not appreciate it. It feels contrived.
I agree the lines are too harsh, I'll be blending those in.
A face in water (especially a woman's) could be cliched. The feeling and meaning each viewer draws from the image is going to be different depending on what films/photographs/books the person has been experienced in their life.
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I feel like the lines of the veil are too hard. It makes the face stand out too much. I also feel as if I've seen this type of image too much so it inherits a type of corniness just because of that.
It looks like a nice picture of water and a nice portrait but combined, I do not appreciate it. It feels contrived.
I agree with Justin. The window frame, or whatever it is, really stands out by not blending with the water.
I agree the lines are too harsh, I'll be blending those in.
A face in water (especially a woman's) could be cliched. The feeling and meaning each viewer draws from the image is going to be different depending on what films/photographs/books the person has been experienced in their life.
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