Friday, April 9, 2010

Senior Redux

These are COMPLETELY UNEDITED images for my senior project that i just restarted due to failing on my previous venture. They are meant to be awkward portraits of people that i will then mess with the curves so that they resemble older film. Remember these are completely unedited...but what do you guys think?

6 comments:

Jace said...

by people i mean couples

Tyler Miller said...

these are hilarious! (its hard to find opportunities to look like an idiot anymore.) I thank you. Cool idea man, looking forward to seeing the final product.

Tyler Miller said...

and the inside one does not bother me, since all the others are outside.

Jace said...

i am going to shoot at least one more inside

Ian Cavanaugh said...

these are nice but im slightly thrown off from by both the inside image and the one with nick. the shirt is just not working for me. I feel it also become repetitive with the way the figures are framed within the image. I would like to see more variation, sitting, not just in the middle, closer, further away. I think this has great potential but it need to be taken further. I would stay with the outside theme. Also the one that are most effective are the ones that seem less posed or set up. let them become awkward on their own.

Aly said...

The only two that don't work for me are the last two. They seem to have a totally different feel to me. I think it's because the clothing by that point has gotten so ridiculous, that I'm thrown off by what you are trying to show. I disagree with Ian (shocking!! LOL). I like the repetitiveness. But I do agree with him in that you should stick with the outdoor theme especially if you are only going to photograph once more inside. I know you said "at least," but you need more than one more to make it balanced.